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I am your disorder
That disease
The feever in your head
The cold sweat from your dreams
I am the nightmare you love so much
The sleep peralysis that holds you to your bed
The name you try to scream
I am the delicious halusination
From drug enduced calm
That injection they give you
The sweet sting of the cold needle
I am that witch won't go away
The shadow in the corner of your room
The trembling of your hands, so cold
The insane smile that creeps along your face
I am that that woman in black
The one with snaking arms about you
The burning pain of vampire kisses
Euphoria of the dark sences
The infectious rush of hot desire
I am all that you wish
The wispers in your ear
The touch sending shivers up your spine
Silent watcher
I am your the everything they don't understand
The thoughts you can't live without
That feeling of insanity
You can't live without me.
©2007-2009 ~CountessK
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Author's Comments

This was just something I made up. The words just seem to flow. I know it's morbid, it's supposed to be that way.
^_^

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:iconsylver-star-shyne:
ah, but morbid is good. i like it's flow alot. there should be a club for all of us who are morbid lol.

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To shed a tear is simply to be human...
:iconcountessk:
I agree very much. Morbid people unite.
^_^
Thank you for the comment.

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I :heart: books, I'm addicted to the written word.
Give me tea and no one gets hurt
:tea:
:iconsylver-star-shyne:
lol we could do that. you're very welcome :-)

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To shed a tear is simply to be human...
:iconroovel:
haha really nice one.. i like that 'i control u' mood :thumbsup:
:iconroovel:
the key >> "I am the delicious halusination"
:iconcountessk:
Thanks ^_^ I was going for a morbid/romantic kinda thing.

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I :heart: books, I'm addicted to the written word.
Give me tea and no one gets hurt
:tea:
:iconcanticum:
Perhaps morbid, but very, very interesting. And the last line, perhaps true...
:iconcountessk:
I always try to get the best imagary for my poetry. The way I see it in my head is the way I like to put it down on paper(or the comp). Morbid things are really the easiest for me to write about. My tea poem was a little more challenging because it didn't have to do with anything dark. Needless to say it turned out good. And this poem to. I think that I tried to compare myself with a bunch of things that I found intresting or apealing to me. I hope that didn't sound weird.

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I :heart: books, I'm addicted to the written word.
Give me tea and no one gets hurt
:tea:

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